P3. Rough Cut and Review

Peer Review:

• The introduction is too long - shots could be cut down a lot to make more room to add extra animation

• Ambient sound should be added for the beginning part where she is taking the exam and at the end - rustling of paper, a clock ticking and people talking quietly

• Needs more animation to bulk up the video and make the majority of it animation, compared to currently how it's about two thirds animation to a third footage

• There is a glitch at 30 seconds that needs to be fixed

• The music is effective when it comes in during the animation and then fades out again as the animation finishes

• A variety of effects could be added to the animation, for example some slow motion shots, reversed shots, sped up shots and so on

Looking at the review, we know that it's important to add more animation and to make the clips more creative by adding a variety of effects. This will make sure the animation won't get boring for the viewer as we will add at least an extra minute of animation for our final cut.